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19 Sep 2006, 7:43 am / Dont know

Hello
I have missed you so
Pray this is not the end
But deep in your soul
You wish it is
These things i cannot say
For fear of cutting to deep
Leave now
I wish you where gone
i away from you
I'm breaking like a twig
And you won't save me
I won't let you.

My Comments

19 Sep 2006, 12:33 pm
Beautiful poem Roz... this will sound like some kind of cheesey critic or something like that but i think that i will risk it, this poem has a lot of emtion in it, and i REALLY like it, do you mind if i put it in this anthology that i am making? ill put who its bye and you can make a comment beneath it to if you want...but would it be alright if i put it in there?







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