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14 Sep 2006, 7:21 am / Lonely

I still love my ex boyfriend Jason with all my heart and he was the best thing that ever happened to me but he broke ^ with me and i still care for him so i I'm posting a poem I wrote for him on here .... 

Safer
With every sense of mine,             
My emotions over whelm me,                        How is it, in so little time,  
I am controlled completely, 
With the mere happiness,  
You've shown my life,  
And the often suspense, 
That excites my heart.   
With the way you look,
Deep within my soul,    
You read me like a book,   
And make me love you so.
With the pain of rejection, 
I greatly slandered you, 
But we both felt the guilt, 
And I didn't know what to do.   
With the affections we share,
We forgave and forgot,
And back into your arms,   
I feel safer than I ever thought!
...wow I think this was me first actual happy poem.... that didnt last long

My Comments

From: KS
14 Sep 2006, 10:52 am
Hmmm, excuse me for being the jerk, but... soon enough, the infatuation will end. You'll be disillusioned. You'll fall into a fit of depression, write sad poems. You will find another person that you'll "fall in love" with. And the cycle repeats. In two years, if I happen to be wrong, contact me. My e-mail is demon_of_flames2003@yahoo.com

Until then, enjoy,

KS







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